2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练六推荐信 本文关键词:推荐信,高考英语,复习,书面,表达
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练六推荐信 本文简介:书面表达针对练(六)推荐信题目要求(2017·陕西省重点中学协作体高考适应性考试)假设你是李华,计划今年暑假去美国旅游两周,请给你的美国朋友David写一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:1.提出你对旅游地点的要求并请David推荐地点;2.你对住宿和交通的要求;3.请他代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢。注意:1
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练六推荐信 本文内容:
书面表达针对练(六)
推荐信
题目要求
(2017·陕西省重点中学协作体高考适应性考试)
假设你是李华,计划今年暑假去美国旅游两周,请给你的美国朋友David写一封电子邮件,主要内容包括:
1.提出你对旅游地点的要求并请David推荐地点;
2.你对住宿和交通的要求;
3.请他代为预订宾馆并对他表示感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear
David,
____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
Best
regards!
Yours,
Li
Hua
四步作文法
第一步
审题谋篇
1.体裁
推荐信
2.时态
一般现在时
3.人称
第一人称为主
第二步
要点要全
1.一想到假期里要去美国旅游我感到很兴奋。
I
feel
very
excited
at
the
thought
that
I_am_going_to_visit_America_in_the_holiday.
2.对我来说,这是第一次独自出国旅行,所以我需要你的帮助。
It
s
the
first
time
for
me
to
travel_abroad_on_my_own,_so
I_need_your_help.
3.我想游览一些有美景的地区,如高山、峡谷、河流和森林,在那里我可以享受大自然的美。
I
d
like
to
visit
some
areas
of
scenic
beauty,such_as_mountains,_valleys,_rivers_and_forests.
There
I
could
enjoy_the_beauty_of_nature.
4.我更喜欢住在宾馆,我希望周围的交通不太拥挤,我要租一辆车开始我的旅行。
I
prefer_to_live_in_the_hotel
and
I
hope
the_traffic_around_isn
s_too_heavy.
I
m
going
to
rent_a_car_to_start_my_travel.
5.请帮我预订一个宾馆。
Please
help_me_book_a_hotel.
第三步
句式要美
1.句3合并升级为where引导的定语从句
I
d_like_to_visit_some_areas_of_scenic_beauty,_such_as_mountains,_valleys,_rivers_and_forests,_where_I_could_enjoy_the_beauty_of_nature.
2.句4合并升级为because引导的状语从句
I_prefer_to_live_in_the_hotel_and_I_hope_the_traffic_around_isn
t_too_heavy_because_I
m_going_to_rent_a_car_to_start_my_travel.
第四步
衔接要顺
用适当的衔接词串句成文
Dear_David,
The
summer
holiday
is
drawing
near.
I
feel
very
excited
at
the
thought
that
I
am
going
to
visit
America
in
the
holiday.
It
s
the
first
time
for
me
to
travel
abroad
on
my
own,so
I
need
your
help.
I
d
like
to
visit
some
areas
of
scenic
beauty,such
as
mountains,valleys,rivers
and
forests,where
I
could
enjoy
the
beauty
of
nature.
Please
recommend
several
places
to
me.
Besides,I
prefer
to
live
in
the
hotel
and
I
hope
the
traffic
around
isn
t
too
heavy
because
I
m
going
to
rent
a
car
to
start
my
travel.
Please
help
me
book
a
hotel.
Thanks
a
lot.
I
m
expecting
to
hear
from
you,and
I
m
looking
forward
to
meeting
you.
Best_regards!
Yours,
Li_Hua
改写两用
这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作,文中有10处错误,请改正。
Dear
David,
The
summer
holiday
is
around
the
corner
and
my
dream
of
travelling
to
America
is
to
come
true,which
makes
me
to
feel
excited.
Which
you
know,this
is
my
first
visit
to
your
country,so
I
have
a
request
you
(should)
do
me
a
favour.
I
would
visit
some
places
of
great
interests,which
can
stand
by
the
characteristic
of
your
country.
Would
you
please
recommend
my
some
scenic
spots?
As
for
accommodation,I
d
like
to
live
in
a
peace
place,around
which
the
traffic
should
not
be
too
heavy,for
I
would
rent
an
mountain
bike
for
convenience.
Please
help
me
book
so
a
hotel
in
advance.
Much
thanks!
Looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Best
regards!
Yours,
Li
Hua
答案:
Dear
David,
The
summer
holiday
is
around
the
corner
and
my
dream
of
travelling
to
America
is
to
come
true,which
makes
me
feel
excited.
you
know,this
is
my
first
visit
to
your
country,so
I
have
a
request
you
(should)
do
me
a
favour.
I
would
visit
some
places
of
great
,
which
can
stand
the
characteristic
of
your
country.
Would
you
please
recommend
some
scenic
spots?
As
for
accommodation,I
d
like
to
live
in
a
place,around
which
the
traffic
should
not
be
too
heavy,for
I
would
rent
mountain
bike
for
convenience.
Please
help
me
book
a
hotel
in
advance.
thanks!
Looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Best
regards!
Yours,
Li
Hua