2017_2018学年高中英语Unit4WildlifeProtectionSectionⅤWriting_建议信教学案新人教版 本文关键词：信教，学年，高中英语，新人，建议
2017_2018学年高中英语Unit4WildlifeProtectionSectionⅤWriting_建议信教学案新人教版 本文简介：Unit4WildlifeProtectionSectionⅤWriting—建议信建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性
2017_2018学年高中英语Unit4WildlifeProtectionSectionⅤWriting_建议信教学案新人教版 本文内容：
Unit
4
Wildlife
Protection
Section
Ⅴ
Writing—建议信
建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
一、基本结构
1．开头——说明写信的原因。
2．主体——陈述建议的具体内容，并指出你所提建议可能会带来的好处。
3．结尾——提出希望自己的建议被采纳的想法。
二、增分佳句
1．It
is
reported
that
more
and
more
species
of
wildlife
are
dying
out.
2．The
reason
why
the
number
of
the
wildlife
is
decreasingis
that
their
living
places
have
been
badly
destroyed.
3．In
modern
times,with
the
development
of
economy
and
the
improvement
of
people
s
life,more
and
more
trees
have
been
cut
down.
4．I
think
stricter
laws
must
be
made
to
punish
people
whohunt
forthe
rare
animals.
5．As
a
result,these
endangered
animals
evendie
out.
6．So,it
s
the
time
for
us
to
protect
our
forests
and
living
environment.
7．Only
in
this
way
can
we
save
them
in
time.
8．I
hope
you
will
find
these
suggestions
helpful/useful.
[题目要求]
假如你叫李华，你所生活的城市周围有很多动植物正逐渐减少，对此你向有关部门写一封信，分析造成这种现象的原因，并根据实际情况提出切实可行的几条建议。但以下几条要点要包括在内：
1．野生动植物的现状；
2．分析造成许多野生动植物濒临灭绝的原因；
3．提出几条保护野生动植物的具体措施。
注意：1.不可遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Sir
or
Madam，
I
m
writing
to
give
some
suggestions
to
protect
the
wildlife
living
in
and
around
our
city.
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________
Yours
sincerely,Li
Hua
第一步：审题构思很关键
一、审题
1．确定体裁：本文为建议信；
2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；
3．确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时态。
二、构思
开头：描述现状。
主体：分析原因，提出措施。
结尾：提出希望。
第二步：核心词汇想周全
1．in_danger_of
危险中
2．extinction绝
3．with_the_development_of_.着……的发展
4．take_measures取措施
5．protect_._from_.护……免受……
第三步：由词扩句雏形现
开头：描述现状
1．正如我们所知，许多野生动植物物种正面临灭绝。
As
we
know,many
species
of
wildlife
are_in_danger_of_extinction.
主体：分析原因，提出措施
2．这是因为野生动植物的生存环境遭到了极大的破坏。
This
is
because
the
environment
that
they
are
living
in
has_been_destroyed_greatly.
3．随着城市的发展，水和空气被严重污染。
With_the_development_of
cities,water
and
air
are_seriously_polluted.
4．它们不仅缺乏食物，而且有时还会被人猎杀。
They
have
little
to
eat
and
also
can
be_killed
by
human
beings.
5．这些野生动植物是我们生活的重要部分，我们应该采取更多的措施保护它们免遭伤害。
These
species
of
wildlife
are
important_part_of_our_life.
More
measures
should
be
taken
to_protect_them_from_being_hurt.
6．制定更多法律以阻止人们砍伐树木。
More
laws
must
be
made
to_stop_people_from_cutting_down_trees.
7．所有工厂在排废水之前必须净化废水。
All
the
factories
must
clean
the
waste
water
before_it_is_poured_into
rivers
or
lakes.
8．建立更多的动植物保护区以便它们安全地生活。
More
reserves
should
be
set
up
so_that_they_can_live_safely.
结尾：提出希望
9．我希望我的建议有帮助。
I
hope
my
suggestions
are
helpful/of_help.
第四步：句式升级造亮点
1．用not
only
.but
also
.改写句4
They__not_only_have_little_to_eat,_but_also_can_be__killed_by_human_beings.
2．用恰当的过渡语连接句6、7、8
Firstly,_more
laws
must
be
made
to
stop
people
from
cutting
down
trees.
Secondly,_all
the
factories
must
clean
the
waste
water
before
it
is
poured
into
rivers
or
lakes.
Thirdly/Lastly,_more
reserves
should
be
set
up
so
that
they
can
live
safely.
第五步：过渡衔接联成篇
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,I
m
writing
to
give
some
suggestions
to
protect
the
wildlife
living
in
and
around
our
city.
As_we_know,_many_species_of_wildlife_are_in_danger_of_extinction.This_is_because___the_environment_that_they_are_living_in_has_been_destroyed_greatly.
With_the_development_of_cities,_water_and_air_are_seriously_polluted._Their_living_areas_are_becoming_smaller_and_smaller._They_not_only_have_little_to_eat,_but_also_can_be_killed_by_human_beings._These_species_of_wildlife_are_important_part_of_our_life._Personally,_more_measures_should_be_taken_to_protect_them_from_being_hurt._Firstly,_more_laws_must_be_made_to_stop_people_from_cutting_down_trees._Secondly,_all_the_factories_must_clean_the_waste_water_before_it_is_poured_into_rivers_or_lakes._Thirdly,_more_reserves_should_be_set_up_so_that_they_can_live_safely.
I_hope__my_suggestions_are_helpful.
Yours
sincerely,Li
Hua