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改良学校午餐建议书

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改良学校午餐建议书 本文简介:改良学校午餐建议书五年级的孩子吃到难吃的学校午餐时会怎么做?礼拜五,宝宝回来跟我说,“妈妈,我的proposal(建议书)交上去。这是复印件。”是给校长副校长的一封信。我以为是作业。先翻翻有多长。一眼看到最后的五个名字及签名。有一个是她的好朋友,但不同班。我说,“你们现在的小组作业还有跨班合作的。

改良学校午餐建议书 本文内容:

改良学校午餐建议书

五年级的孩子吃到难吃的学校午餐时会怎么做?

礼拜五,宝宝回来跟我说,“妈妈,我的proposal(建议书)交上去。这是复印件。”

是给校长,副校长的一封信。我以为是作业。先翻翻有多长。一眼看到最后的五个名字及签名。有一个是她的好朋友,但不同班。

我说,“你们现在的小组作业还有跨班合作的。”

宝说,“不是作业。”

我说,“什么叫不是作业。”

宝有点不耐烦了,“不是作业,就是我跟朋友做的。不是老师布置的。”

我,“你说交了,交给了谁。”

宝,“校长,副校长,我们老师。”

我大吃一惊。“谁起的头?“宝说,”我。“我,”谁写的?“宝,”主要是我,其他人帮忙修改和打字。”

我,“你是怎么样发动另外的4个人的。”

宝,“我就是跟她们说学校午餐这么难吃,又吃不饱,我们要作点什么。然后给她们分派任务。”

我有点佩服了,“她们就这样去做了。”

宝,“没有,比如xxx写一部分的,她没写,我就全写了,yyy本来应该打全文的,也没做。那我说,要把名字放进来,xxx打第一段,yyy打最后一段。她们还拖到最后一刻才做。”

我已经很佩服她了。我五年级的时候在干嘛啊。不说五年级,大学食堂这么难吃。我们有调侃,有抱怨,有愤怒,就是没有去真的做什么。

何况全文写的动之以情,晓之以理,诱之以利。虽然有些地方想法有点幼稚。

译文:

亲爱的鲍校长和段副校长:

当你们收到这封信时,我们可能已经不在这所学校读书了,但我们对在此成长和学习了六年的学校的爱,却不会褪色。我们希望为未来的学生有更好的环境做点事情:提议改善学校午餐的质量。从儿童和家长的角度来看,学校午餐可以改进的地方有:食物不健康,份量太少,和午餐价格不合理。

首先,有些午餐选择不健康。例如,孩子们目前可以选苹果或者曲奇饼。大多数孩子会选择曲奇饼。这会给在美国正在上升的肥胖率雪上加霜。如何让孩子做健康的选择是我们想要解决的问题,虽然时不时能吃点喜欢吃的也挺好,比如说,间或可以有应节曲奇饼干,酸奶等。日常供应的水果和蔬菜要选新鲜甜美的,使他们比曲奇饼等含糖食物更诱人和更好吃。这样在菜单上变点花样可以让儿童品尝到健康和富有营养的食物,更有助于他们发育和成长。吃适当的和饱肚子的食物有助于他们的学业进步,从而提升我们学校的评级。另外,许多家长因为太多油腻而不让自己的孩子吃学校午餐。如果学校提供的是健康的食品,将会有更多的家长让自己的孩子吃学校午餐,从而提高利润。

除了不健康的食物选择,另一导致午餐危机的原因是食物的份量。有时学生午饭后,还是肚子空空,无法专心上课,或认真学习。许多学生要靠这顿午餐撑到6或7点钟。如果他们吃不饱,就可能会向父母抱怨,改为自带午餐。

价钱是学校午餐的一个很重要的因素,太贵没人会买,太便宜又不能保证食物质量和新鲜度。重要的是价格适中并有营养。有些家长不让学生吃学校午餐的原因,是要价2.75美元一份,仅有牛奶,一个主菜,两,三个配菜的午餐不够健康。如果更多父母首肯,更多学生会买学校午餐,学校也会赚更多的钱。另一项建议是自种果园。学校也可以在花园里,不种花而改种蔬菜,从而把新鲜的蔬果用于午餐。

虽然新鲜的蔬果不如加工食品便宜,而且增加食物量会提高成本,但是改善学校午餐,能让学校成为一个更快乐,更健康的社区。总而言之,我们五位斯特梅尔的学生认为提高学校午餐质量,有助于提高客户的满意度。肥腻,小量,和价格过高的食物,可换成营养,饱肚,和价格合理的午餐。如果这些要求能做到,午餐时间将更令人愉悦。

你诚挚的:

(为了孩子的缘故,我去掉了名字,只留缩写)

d.

s,room.

52,(签名)

m.

h,room.

52,(签名)

a.

t,room.

52,(签名)

s.

a,room.

52,(签名)

m.

h,room

50.

(签名)

回信请寄52班或我们每人的地址。

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妈妈对宝说的是:

1.

能够做到不抱怨,提建议,世界上从来不缺乏抱怨指责的人,却少有做实事,寻找解决方法的人.

2.

虽然你自己做了大部分工作,但不凸显自己,标榜“xxx领导”,而是没有头衔,大家平等。做到团结同学。

3.

可以改进的地方有几点,学校午餐的运作是这样的。。。。。。。

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征得宝的同意,附上原文。

june

XX

dear

principal

mrs.

boyce

and

vice

principal

mrs.

duarte,when

you

receive

this

letter,we

may

not

be

attending

stocklmeir

anymore,but

our

love

for

the

school

that

helped

us

grow

and

learn

for

six

years

hasn

t

faded.

we

hope

that

we

can

make

a

difference

for

the

future

students

by

improving

the

hot

lunches.

from

the

childrens

and

parents

point

of

view

some

things

that

would

help

if

they

are

improved

are:

unhealthy

food

choices,small

portions,and

hot

lunch

price.

first

of

all,some

of

the

hot

lunch

choices

are

unhealthy.

for

example,the

kids

have

a

choice

between

an

apple

and

cookie.

most

kids

will

choose

the

cookie

against

the

apple.

this

adds

to

america’s

already

rising

obesity

rate.

making

these

types

of

decisions

are

what

we

want

to

solve,but

a

little

treat

once

in

awhile

is

good.

holiday

cookies,yogurt,etc.

can

be

in

the

menu

occasionally.

fruits

and

veggies

must

be

fresh

and

sweet

to

make

them

tempting

and

better

than

sugary

foods

like

cookies.

putting

in

a

little

twist

to

the

menu

can

help

the

childrens

taste

healthy,nourishing

foods

that

help

them

develop

and

grow.

eating

the

proper

and

filling

foods

is

a

great

help

in

supporting

their

academic

achievement

and

help

our

school’s

rating.

also,many

parents

don’t

let

their

children

get

hot

lunch

because

it

has

too

much

oil

and

grease

in

it.

with

healthier

foods,more

parents

will

allow

their

children

to

get

hot

lunch,raising

the

profit.

in

addition

to

bad

choices,another

problem

leading

up

to

this

hot

lunch

crisis

is

the

portion

of

food

each

child

is

given.

sometimes

the

students

are

left

with

an

empty

stomach

after

lunch

and

cannot

focus

on

their

class

work

or

not

put

as

much

effort

as

they

should.

many

students

rely

on

the

lunch

to

fill

them

up

until

6

or

7

pm.

if

they

don

t

get

enough

to

eat,they

might

complain

to

their

parent

and

bring

their

own

meal

instead.

money

is

a

large

factor

in

school

hot

lunches.

if

they

are

too

expensive,then

no

one

will

buy

them.

but

if

they

are

too

cheap,the

foods

are

not

as

fresh

and

are

lower

quality.

it

is

important

that

the

prices

are

just

right,and

they

are

worth

their

nutritious

value.that

is

why

some

parents

do

not

let

their

students

get

hot

lunch;

the

foods

are

not

healthy

enough

for

the

price

of

$2.75

for

milk,a

main

course,and

two

or

more

side

dishes.

more

students

will

buy

more

hot

lunches

because

their

parents

approve

of

it

and

the

school

will

make

more

money

too.

another

recommendation

is

to

grow

an

orchard

for

fruits.

also,the

school

can

grow

veggies

in

the

garden

instead

of

flowers,and

put

the

fresh

into

the

lunches.

though

fresh

produce

is

not

as

cheap

as

processed

foods,and

adding

more

food

costs

more

money,improving

the

hot

lunches

will

make

the

school

a

happier,healthier

community.

overall,we,five

stocklmeir

students,think

that

the

hot

lunches

can

be

improved

to

raise

customer

satisfaction.

the

fattening,tiny,and

overpriced

foods,replaced

with

nutritious,filling,and

reasonably

priced

foods

for

everyday

lunches.

if

these

requests

were

fulfilled,it

would

make

lunchtime

a

more

joyous

place

sincerely,(为了孩子的缘故,我去掉了名字,只留缩写)

d.

s,room.

52,(签名)

m.

h,room.

52,(签名)

a.

t,room.

52,(签名)

s.

a,room.

52,(签名)

m.

h,room

50.

(签名)

please

leave

a

return

letter

for

room.

52

or

to

any

of

our

addresse

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