2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练三电子邮件普通书信 本文关键词：书信，高考英语，复习，书面，电子邮件
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练三电子邮件普通书信 本文简介：书面表达针对练(三)电子邮件/普通书信题目要求(2017·云南八校区联考)假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：1．陪伴；2．照顾；3．其他。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练三电子邮件普通书信 本文内容：
书面表达针对练(三)
电子邮件/普通书信
题目要求
(2017·云南八校区联考)
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter得知你家三世同堂，对这种生活方式很不理解。你就此给他回复一封电子邮件。要点包括：
1．陪伴；
2．照顾；
3．其他。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear
Peter，
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
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______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
Yours，
Li
Hua
四步作文法
第一步
审题谋篇
1．体裁
电子邮件
2．时态
一般现在时
3．人称
第三人称
第二步
要点要全
1．很正常你不理解祖父母与我们一起生活。
It_is_normal_that_you_can
t_understand
why
my
grandparents
are
living
with
us.
2．众所周知，老人常常感到孤独，我祖父母也同样。
As_we_all_know,_old_people_always_feel_lonely.
My
grandparents
feel
lonely
too.
3．当我父母忙于工作时，我祖父母可以陪伴我。
When
my
parents
are_busy_with_their_work,_my
grandparents
will
keep
me
company.
4．更重要的是，他们身体状况不好，因此需要照顾，只有用这种方式我们才能彼此相互照顾。
Most_importantly,_they
are
in
poor
health,so
they
need
looking
after.
Only
in
this
way
can
we
take
good
care
of
each
other.
5．事实上，在中国几代人乐意一起生活。
Actually,in
China
generations
are_willing_to_live_together.
6．照顾老人在中国文化中被认为是一种美德。
Caring
for
the
old
is_considered_as_a_virtue
in
Chinese
culture.
7．在你们的传统文化中是如何善养老人的？
How
about
your
culture
of
supporting_your_elders?
第三步
句式要美
1．句2合并升级so引导的倒装句式
As_we_all_know,_old_people_always_feel_lonely,_so_do_my_grandparents.
2．句4升级为what引导的主语从句
What_is_most_important_is_that_they_are_in_poor_health,_so_they_need_looking_after._Only_in_this_way_can_we_take_good_care_of_each_other.
第四步
衔接要顺
Dear_Peter，
How
are
you
getting
along
these
days?
It
is
normal
that
you
can
not
understand
why
my
grandparents
are
living
with
us.
Here
is
something
about
it.
As
we
all
know,old
people
always
feel
lonely,so
do
my
grandparents.
Besides,when
my
parents
are
busy
with
their
work,my
grandparents
will
keep
me
company.
What
is
most
important
is
that
they
are
in
poor
health,so
they
need
looking
after.
Only
in
this
way
can
we
take
good
care
of
each
other.
Actually,in
China
generations
are
willing
to
live
together.
Caring
for
the
old
is
considered
as
a
virtue
in
Chinese
culture.
How
about
your
culture
of
supporting
your
elders?
I
m
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours，
Li_Hua
改写两用
这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。
Dear
Peter，
I
have
received
your
letter,which
say
you
can
t
understand
my
grandparents
live
with
us.
Therefore,it
s
a
very
common
phenomenon
which
three
generations
live
under
the
same
roof.
The
reason
are
as
follows.
Firstly,it
is
well-known
that
old
people
often
feel
lonely,included
my
grandparents.
They
are
willing
to
live
with
us
about
company.
More
importantly,they
need
to
looked
after
considering
our
poor
health.
We
live
together
so
that
we
can
know
everything
about
their
mental
and
physically
health.
Last
but
not
least,it
is
an
tradition
and
virtue
to
respect
and
take
good
care
of
the
old
in
China.
I
m
wondering
how
you
support
your
elders.
I
m
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Yours，
Li
Hua
答案：
Dear
Peter，
I
have
received
your
letter,which
you
can
t
understand
my
grandparents
live
with
us.
，
it
s
a
very
common
phenomenon
three
generations
live
under
the
same
roof.
The
are
as
follows.
Firstly,it
is
well-known
that
old
people
often
feel
lonely,my
grandparents.
They
are
willing
to
live
with
us
company.
More
importantly,they
need
to
looked
after
considering
poor
health.
We
live
together
so
that
we
can
know
everything
about
their
mental
and
health.
Last
but
not
least,it
is
tradition
and
virtue
to
respect
and
take
good
care
of
the
old
in
China.
I
m
wondering
how
you
support
your
elders.
I
m
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Yours，
Li
Hua