2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练十演讲稿 本文关键词:演讲稿,高考英语,复习,书面,表达
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练十演讲稿 本文简介:书面表达针对练(十)演讲稿题目要求(2017·沈阳高三质检)在和谐社会里,人际关系中的互帮互助已成为我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问,你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“HelpingEachOtherMakestheWorldWonderful”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以李华的名义用
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练十演讲稿 本文内容:
书面表达针对练(十)
演讲稿
题目要求
(2017·沈阳高三质检)
在和谐社会里,人际关系中的互帮互助已成为我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问,你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping
Each
Other
Makes
the
World
Wonderful”为题的英语演讲比赛。请你以李华的名义用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点如下:
1.帮助同学——加深友谊;
2.帮助老人——幸福;
3.帮助病人——快乐;
4.帮助别人的体会和感悟。
注意:词数100左右。
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四步作文法
第一步
审题谋篇
1.体裁
演讲稿
2.时态
一般现在时
3.人称
第一人称为主
第二步
要点要全
1.我们都知道,互帮互助是我们生活的重要组成部分。
We_all_know_that_helping_each_other_is_an_important_part_of_our_life.
2.我们可以从帮助别人中获得更多。
We_can_gain_more_from_helping_others.
3.当我们帮助我们的同学时,我们可以加深我们的友谊。
We_can_strengthen_our_friendship_when_we_help_our_classmates.
4.帮助别人可以提升我们自己。
Helping_others_can_promote_ourselves.
5.我乐于帮助有困难的人。我坚信这对于构建一个和谐美好的世界将非常有用。
I
m_ready_to_help_others_in_need,_and_I_strongly_believe_that_it_will_be_of_great_use_to_build_a_harmonious_and_wonderful_world.
第三步
句式要美
句1升级为定语从句或主语从句
①As_we_all_know,_helping_each_other_is_an_important_part_of_our_life.
②It_is_known_to_us_that_helping_each_other_is_an_important_part_of_our_life.
③What_is_known_to_us_is_that_helping_each_other_is_an_important_part_of_our_life.
第四步
衔接要顺
用for
example,and,in
a
word,so等衔接词串句成文
Helping
Each
Other
Makes
the
World
Wonderful
Hello,everyone.
I
m
Li
Hua.
Today
I
am
very
glad
to
have
the
chance
to
speak
about
the
topic.
As
we
all
know,helping
each
other
is
an
important
part
of
our
life.
We
can
gain
more
from
helping
others.
For
example,we
can
strengthen
our
friendship
when
we
help
our
classmates.
We
can
feel
happy
when
we
help
old
people.
And
we
take
great
pleasure
when
we
help
patients
in
hospital.
In
a
word,helping
others
can
promote
ourselves.
So
I
m
ready
to
help
others
in
need,and
I
strongly
believe
that
it
will
be
of
great
use
to
build
a
harmonious
and
wonderful
world.
Let
s
take
action
to
achieve
the
good
wishes.
Thank
you
for
your
listening.
改写两用
这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作,文中有10处错误,请改正。
Helping
Each
Other
Makes
the
World
Wonderful
Ladies
and
gentlemen,I
m
Li
Hua.
I
am
so
honoured
to
be
here
today
with
all
of
you
to
talk
of
helping
each
other.
In
our
life
we
often
help
others
and
also
gets
help
from
others.
When
we
help
our
classmates
with
their
study
and
others
things,we
can
developed
our
friendship.
If
we
give
hand
to
old
people,we
can
understand
the
meaning
of
happy.
We
can
also
give
our
helping
hands
to
those
who
is
suffering
from
illness,which
it
can
give
us
much
pleasure.
I
think
we
can
get
much
when
helped
the
people
around
us.
As
the
saying
goes,“Giving
is
much
best
than
receiving.”
答案:
Helping
Each
Other
Makes
the
World
Wonderful
Ladies
and
gentlemen,I
m
Li
Hua.
I
am
so
honoured
to
be
here
today
with
all
of
you
to
talk
helping
each
other.
In
our
life
we
often
help
others
and
also
help
from
others.
When
we
help
our
classmates
with
their
study
and
things,we
can
our
friendship.
If
we
give
hand
to
old
people,we
can
understand
the
meaning
of
.
We
can
also
give
our
helping
hands
to
those
who
suffering
from
illness,which
can
give
us
much
pleasure.
I
think
we
can
get
much
when
the
people
around
us.
As
the
saying
goes,“Giving
is
much
than
receiving.”