2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练四申请信 本文关键词：高考英语，复习，书面，表达，申请
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练四申请信 本文简介：书面表达针对练(四)申请信题目要求(2017·黑龙江八校联考)你校的外教ChrisPearson开设了一个英语辅导班(EnglishTutorial)，可根据学生的实际需要进行辅导。报名者须根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。假如你是新华中学的高三学生李明，请你给外教写一封电子邮件申请加入辅导班
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练四申请信 本文内容：
书面表达针对练(四)
申请信
题目要求
(2017·黑龙江八校联考)
你校的外教Chris
Pearson开设了一个英语辅导班(English
Tutorial)，可根据学生的实际需要进行辅导。报名者须根据个人实际情况提出申请并选择辅导内容。假如你是新华中学的高三学生李明，请你给外教写一封电子邮件申请加入辅导班。内容主要包括：
1．介绍个人情况；
2．说明辅导意向(如口语、语法、写作、文化知识等其中的一项或几项)；
3．表达愿望。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Mr.
Pearson，
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
the
membership
of
the
English
Tutorial.
____________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
sincerely，
Li
Ming
四步作文法
第一步
审题谋篇
1．体裁
申请信
2．时态
一般现在时
3．人称
第一人称为主
第二步
要点要全
1．我是李明，新华中学高三一名学生。
My
name
is
Li
Ming,I
am
a_Senior_Three_student_of_Xin_Hua_Middle_School.
2．我认为这是一个提高我的英语技能的好机会。
I
think
it_is_a_good_chance_for_me_to_improve
my
English
skills.
3．虽然已经学习英语近六年了，我仍然没掌握好。
I
have_been_learning_English
for
nearly
six
years.
I
m_still_not_good_at
it.
4．我觉得语法很困难，我必须花很多时间在上面。
I
find
the
grammar
is
difficult.
I
must
spend_much_time_on
it.
5．我们的老师只强调英语知识的教学。因此，我们没有机会练习英语口语。
Our
teacher
only
emphasizes
the
teaching
of
English
knowledge.
As
a
result,we
have_no_chance_to_practise_oral_English.
6．我确信，在你的帮助下，我的语法和口语可以大大提高。
I
m_convinced_that
my
grammar
and
oral
English
could
be_greatly_improved_with_your_help.
第三步
句式要美
1．句1升级为名词短语作同位语
My_name_is_Li_Ming,_a_Senior_Three_student_of_Xin_Hua_Middle_School.
2．句3升级为although/though引导的让步状语从句
Though_I_have_been_learning_English_for_nearly_six_years,_I
m_still_not_good_at_it.
3．句4升级so.
that引导的状语从句
I_find_the_grammar_is_so_difficult_that_I_must_spend_much_time_on_it.
第四步
衔接要顺
用firstly,in
addition,therefore等衔接词串句成文
Dear_Mr._Pearson，
I
m_writing_to_apply_for_the_member_of_the_English_Tutorial._My
name
is
Li
Ming,a
Senior
Three
student
of
Xin
Hua
Middle
School.
I
think
it
is
a
good
chance
for
me
to
improve
my
English
skills.
Firstly,I
d
like
to
tell
you
my
present
situation.
Though
I
have
been
learning
English
for
nearly
six
years,I
m
still
not
good
at
it.
I
find
the
grammar
is
so
difficult
that
I
must
spend
much
time
on
it.
In
addition,to
ensure
students
can
get
good
marks
in
exams,our
teacher
only
emphasizes
the
teaching
of
English
knowledge.
As
a
result,we
have
no
chance
to
practise
oral
English.
Therefore,I
do
hope
I
can
be
a
member
of
the
English
Tutorial.
I
m
convinced
that
my
grammar
and
oral
English
could
be
greatly
improved
with
your
help.
Looking_forward_to_your_reply.
Yours_sincerely，
Li_Ming
改写两用
这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。
Dear
Mr.
Pearson，
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
the
membership
of
the
English
Tutorial.
As
an
Senior
3
student
of
Xin
Hua
Middle
School,I
m
not
doing
very
well
in
English
but
I
always
get
poor
marks
in
the
exam.
Although
my
spoken
English
is
very
good,and
I
can
even
communicate
to
the
foreigners,but
my
written
English
and
grammar
are
very
bad.
Besides,I
can
t
write
the
English
composition
good,that
is
what
troubles
me
most.
Could
you
offer
me
guide
on
English
learning,especially
written
English
and
grammars
in
the
English
Tutorial?
I
would
appreciate
if
you
could
consider
mine
application.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
sincerely，
Li
Ming
答案：
Dear
Mr.
Pearson，
I
am
writing
to
apply
for
the
membership
of
the
English
Tutorial.
As
Senior
3
student
of
Xin
Hua
Middle
School,I
m
not
doing
very
well
in
English
I
always
get
poor
marks
in
the
exam.
Although
my
spoken
English
is
very
good,and
I
can
even
communicate
the
foreigners,my
written
English
and
grammar
are
very
bad.
Besides,I
can
t
write
the
English
composition
，
is
what
troubles
me
most.
Could
you
offer
me
on
English
learning,especially
written
English
and
in
the
English
Tutorial?
I
would
appreciate
if
you
could
consider
application.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours
sincerely，
Li
Ming