2017年高考英语考前复习大串讲专题3.5书面表达感悟高考 本文关键词：高考，年高，串讲，英语，考前
2017年高考英语考前复习大串讲专题3.5书面表达感悟高考 本文简介：书面表达感悟高考Passage1（2016年新课标1卷）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MsJenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。【答案】DearMsJ
2017年高考英语考前复习大串讲专题3.5书面表达感悟高考 本文内容：
书面表达感悟高考
Passage1
（2016年新课标1卷）假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms
Jenkins
写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。
注意：
1.
词数100左右;
2.
可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear
Ms
Jenkins,I
am
Li
Hua.
I
am
writing
to
tell
you
something
about
my
plan
for
the
coming
summer
vacation
and
I
also
want
you
to
do
me
a
favor.
In
order
to
get
some
practical
experience,I
am
planning
to
take
a
part-time
job
in
a
foreign
capital
company.
I
have
already
finished
my
job
application
and
personal
resume.
But
this
is
the
first
time
that
I
have
written
an
application
and
the
personal
resume,so
I
don’t
even
know
if
there
are
something
to
pay
attention
to.
So,I’m
writing
you
the
letter,hoping
you
can
give
me
some
help.
I
will
be
very
grateful
if
you
can
help
me.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
And
I’d
be
really
thankful.
Yours,Li
Hua
【亮点】
本文是一篇较为优秀的范本。格式正确，要点全面，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。在本文中开头提出写信的目的，然后具体讲述自己的困难，再提出请求，最后表达自己的感激之情。所以在内容上逻辑性较强。此外，作者还使用了不定式短语In
order
to
get
some
practical
experience,现在分词短语hoping
you
can
give
me
some
help,宾语从句if
there
are
something
to
pay
attention
to等。经典句式this
is
the
first
time
that
I
have
written
an
application
and
the
personal
resume也是文章的亮点所在。
Passage2
（2016年浙江卷）“Planning
is
good,but
doing
is
better”是一句英国名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100~120词的短文。
要求如下：
1.
简述你对这句名言的理解；
2.
用一个具体事例加以说明；
3.
给出恰当的结尾。
注意：1.
文章的标题已给出（不计词数）：
2.
文中不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、老师或同学姓名等真实信息，否则按作弊行为认定。
Planning
Is
Good,But
Doing
Is
Better
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Planning
Is
Good,But
Doing
Is
Better
Planning
is
good
as
it
decides
in
detail
how
we
do
what
we
want
to
do.
However,a
plan
can
bear
no
fruit
without
being
actually
carried
out.
My
experience
in
the
English
speech
contest
last
October
is
a
case
in
point.
A
month
before
the
event,I
spent
hours
working
out
a
schedule
outlining
my
goals
and
practical
steps.
After
that,I
set
out
to
read
widely
for
an
inspiring
topic,wrote
a
speech,and
practiced
its
delivery
in
beautiful
pronunciation
with
good
public
speech
skills.
I
finally
came
out
of
the
contest
as
the
first
prize
winner.
I
know
how
I
achieved
my
success.
It
came
from
good
planning
and
better
doing
combined.
【解析】
试题分析：本文为一篇开放式作文。题目给出标题和提纲。结合题目可判断出主要是介绍将计划付诸实施的重要性。围绕这个主旨去写，不能跑题。提纲部分还要求三个方面：1.简述你对这句名言的理解；2.用一个具体事例加以说明；3.给出恰当的结尾。这就确定了作文的结构框架。在主旨和结构确定下来后，还要注意文章应用第一人称和一般现在时和一般过去时。写作时发挥自己的想象，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将文章完整地表述出来。注意要主次分明、详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁，同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章自然连贯。最后要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。?
【名师点睛】
本篇范本短小精悍，结构合理，语言简洁，时态、人称准确，很好地完成了写作任务。在文章开头，作者紧扣题目，提出自己对plan的理解，同时引出下文，然后用自己的亲身经历表明要将计划付诸实施非常重要。在文中，作者用到了短语in
detail,bear
no
fruit,carry
out,set
out
to等短语，避免了文章表达的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句how
we
do和how
I
achieved
my
success,以及句型It
came
from
good
planning
and
better
doing
combined等，这些都给文章增加了亮点。
Passage3
（2016年北京卷）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim
在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1.
该人物是谁；
2.
该人物的主要贡献；
3.
该人物对你的影响。
注意：
1.
词数不少于50；
2.
开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear
Jim,____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,Li
Hua
【答案】
Dear
Jim,It’s
great
to
hear
from
you.
I
feel
proud
knowing
your
interest
in
Chinese
history.
As
for
my
favourite
figure
in
Chinese
history,it
must
be
Wei
Yuan,a
great
thinker
in
the
late
Qing
Dynasty.
He,in
his
book,Haiguo
Tuzhi
(Maps
and
Records
of
the
World),introduced
modern
technologies
and
ideas
to
China.
That
opened
our
eyes
to
the
world.
In
fact,he
inspires
me
to
major
in
English
in
college
to
be
a
bridge
between
China
and
the
world.
Interested
in
knowing
more?
I
can
find
you
some
books!
Just
let
me
know.
Cheers!
Yours,Li
Hua
亮点说明：范本使用了词组hear
from,As
for,In
fact和搭配inspire
sb
to
do
sth等，丰富了作文内容；范本注意上下文的语意连贯。
【名师点睛】
本题偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。
Passage4
（2015年新课标1卷）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1.
栏目介绍；
2.
稿件内容；
3.
稿件长度：约400词；
4.
交稿日期：6月28日前。
注意：
1.
词数100左右；
2.
可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；
3.
开头语已为你写好。
【答案】
Dear
Peter,I
d
like
to
ask
you
to
write
an
article
for
our
school’s
English
newspaper.
The
“Foreign
Cultures”
section
in
our
newspaper
is
very
popular
among
us
students.
It
carries
articles
written
by
foreign
friends
about
the
cultures
of
their
home
countries.
Would
you
please
write
something
about
the
culture
in
your
part
of
the
United
States?
And
we
would
especially
welcome
articles
about
how
Americans
spend
their
holidays
and
festivals,and
the
life
of
American
high
school
students.
You
can
write
anything
relevant
so
long
as
it’
s
interesting
and
informative.
400
words
would
be
fine.
Could
we
have
your
article
before
June
28?
I’m
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you.
Yours,Li
Hua
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It
carries
articles
written
by
foreign
friends
about
the
cultures
of
their
home
countries.运用了过去分词作后置定语，
And
we
would
especially
welcome
articles
about
how
Americans
spend
their
holidays
and
festivals,and
the
life
of
American
high
school
students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be
popular
among,so
long
as,look
forward
to,hear
from等。
Passage5
（2014年新课标2卷）一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1.
家庭：
2.
工作：
3.
业余生活。
注意：1.词数100左右：
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3.开头语已为你写好。
【答案】
I
often
imagine
what
my
life
would
be
like
in
the
future
.
I
think
my
life
will
be
very
different
in
ten
years
.i
will
be
twenty
–eight
years
old
by
then
.
I
will
have
my
own
family,probably
with
a
lovely
child
.
I
hope
I
will
work
in
a
computer
company
as
a
program
designer
.
I
will
enjoy
my
work
and
get
along
well
with
my
colleagues
.
I’will
do
a
good
job
in
whatever
I
do
.In
my
free
time,I
will
continue
to
take
regular
exercise,such
as
swimming,running
and
various
ball
games
.
On
my
holidays,I
will
travel
around
the
world
.In
a
word,my
life
will
be
much
richer
and
more
colorful
.
【亮点说明】
本篇范本短小精悍，要点全面，语言简练，时态人称准确，很好的完成了写作任务。在文章开头作者紧扣题目，提出自己对未来的畅想，然后从生活，工作，家庭三个方面描述了自己十年后的生活。在文中作者用到了短语In
my
free
time,In
a
word,such
as等介词短语，避免了文章句式的单一。此外，还用到了宾语从句in
whatever
I
do、I
will
work
in
a
computer
company
as
a
program
designer等，这些都给朴素的语言带来了亮点。