2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练七道歉信 本文关键词：高考英语，复习，书面，表达，道歉信
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练七道歉信 本文简介：书面表达针对练(七)道歉信题目要求(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1．表示歉意；2．说明原因；3．另约时间。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。__________________________
2018届高考英语二轮复习书面表达针对练七道歉信 本文内容：
书面表达针对练(七)
道歉信
题目要求
(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．表示歉意；
2．说明原因；
3．另约时间。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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四步作文法
第一步
审题谋篇
1．体裁
道歉信
2．时态
一般现在时
3．人称
第一人称
第二步
要点要全
1．我们计划这个星期六去书店。
We
planned_to_go_to_the_bookstore_this_Saturday.
2．不幸的是，我不能赴约。
Unfortunately,I_can
t_make_it.
3．正因为如此，我写信是想表达我真诚的道歉。
Because_of_this,_I
m_writing_to_express_my_heartfelt_apology_to_you.
4．我被选出来代表我们学校参加英语辩论比赛，你知道这对我来说是非常重要的。
I
m_chosen_to_represent_our_school_to_take_part_in_the_English_debate_competition.
It
is
of_great_importance_to_me.
5．如果我们这个星期天去书店你方便吗？
Would_it_be_convenient_for_you_if_we_go_to_the_bookshop_this_Sunday?
第三步
句式要美
把句4升级为定语从句
I
m_chosen_to_represent_our_school_to_take_part_in_the_English_debate_competition,_which,_you_know,_is_of_great_importance_to_me.
第四步
衔接要顺
用unfortunately,however等衔接词串句成文
Dear
Bob，
How
are
you
doing?
We
planned
to
go
to
the
bookstore
this
Saturday.
Unfortunately,I
can
t
make
it.
Because
of
this,I
m
writing
to
express
my
heartfelt
apology
to
you.
How
I
wish
I
could
go
with
you!
However,I
m
chosen
to
represent
our
school
to
take
part
in
the
English
debate
competition,which,you
know,is
of
great
importance
to
me,for
I
have
been
dreaming
of
having
a
chance
like
this
to
improve
my
spoken
English.
Would
it
be
convenient
for
you
if
we
go
to
the
bookshop
this
Sunday?
I
m
looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours，
Li
Hua
改写两用
这是根据本题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中有10处错误，请改正。
Dear
Bob，
I
m
indeed
very
sorry
that
I
can
t
go
to
the
bookstore
with
you
this
weekend
as
planning.
Just
now,my
cousin,which
went
to
Australia
for
further
study
last
year,informs
me
he
would
return
this
Saturday
morning
and
asked
me
to
pick
him
up
at
the
airport.
You
know,I
haven
t
seen
each
other
since
he
leaves.
As
a
result,I
have
no
choose
but
to
say
sorry
to
you.
Please
accepting
my
sincere
apology
from
bottom
of
my
heart.
How
about
going
to
the
bookshop
on
this
Sunday?
Will
you
be
available
then?
I
m
looking
forward
to
hearing
of
you.
Yours，
Li
Hua
答案：
Dear
Bob，
I
m
indeed
very
sorry
that
I
can
t
go
to
the
bookstore
with
you
this
weekend
as
.
Just
now,my
cousin,went
to
Australia
for
further
study
last
year,me
he
would
return
this
Saturday
morning
and
asked
me
to
pick
him
up
at
the
airport.
You
know,haven
t
seen
each
other
since
he
.
As
a
result,I
have
no
but
to
say
sorry
to
you.
Please
my
sincere
apology
from
bottom
of
my
heart.
How
about
going
to
the
bookshop
this
Sunday?
Will
you
be
available
then?
I
m
looking
forward
to
hearing
you.
Yours，
Li
Hua